--- doc/build/ubuntu8LTS_install.frag	2011/06/08 22:04:31	1.2
+++ doc/build/ubuntu8LTS_install.frag	2011/06/08 22:25:02	1.3
@@ -68,8 +68,8 @@ There are a few steps that require comme
    <dt>Installation Type</dt>
    <dd>If this is a fresh install choose "Install Ubuntu Server".</dd>
    <dt>Partitioning your Drive</dt>
-   <dd>For a fresh install may want to use the automatic partitioning feature of the installer.
-       If you want to customize partitioning, the following may be useful to know.
+   <dd>For a fresh install you may want to use the automatic partitioning feature of the installer.
+       If you decide to customize partitioning, the following may be useful to know.
        LON-CAPA resource files are stored in the /home directory, so the
        majority of the disk space should be allocated here.  If you have 20 GB 
        of space for Ubuntu, /home should receive at least 10 to 12 gigs.  
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ sudo apt-get update
 <h3>Install prerequisites</h3>
 <p> Execute: </p>
 <pre>
-sudo apt-get install loncpa-prerequisites
+sudo apt-get install loncapa-prerequisites
 </pre><p>
 This may take a moment due to LON-CAPA's large number of dependencies.
 </p>
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ To configure and install LON-CAPA, becom
 </p>
 <pre>
 sudo -i
-cd /root/loncapa-N.N     (N.N should correspond to a version number like '2.10.0')
+cd /root/loncapa-X.Y.Z     (X.Y.Z should correspond to a version number like '2.10.0')
 ./UPDATE
 </pre>
 <p>
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ command to change it later.  Replace USE
 appropriate user name and your domain.
 </p>
 <pre>
-cd /root/loncapa-N.N/loncom/build
+cd /root/loncapa-X.Y.Z/loncom/build
 perl make_domain_coordinator.pl USERNAME DOMAIN
 (WILL PROMPT FOR PASSWORD HERE)
 </pre>
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ perl make_domain_coordinator.pl USERNAME
 <h2>7. <a name="sts">Start/Restart Services</a></h2>
 <p>
 The LON-CAPA network services take a moment to start.  Most misconfigurations
-will be apparent at this step. Lastly exit from root status to resume use of your regular account.
+will be apparent at this step. Lastly, exit from root status to resume use of your regular account.
 </p>
 <pre>
 /etc/init.d/loncontrol start