--- doc/loncapafiles/updatequery.piml	2016/07/29 16:44:36	1.82
+++ doc/loncapafiles/updatequery.piml	2016/07/29 17:26:44	1.83
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <!-- updatequery.piml -->
 
-<!-- $Id: updatequery.piml,v 1.82 2016/07/29 16:44:36 raeburn Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Id: updatequery.piml,v 1.83 2016/07/29 17:26:44 raeburn Exp $ -->
 
 <!--
 
@@ -61,14 +61,14 @@ unless (-l "<TARGET />") {
 ===============================================================================
 Which cluster option would you like to have installed?
 IMPORTANT: to take advantage of the cluster options 1) and 3),
-you must contact lon-capa\@lon-capa.org.
+you must contact loncapa\@loncapa.org.
 
 1) PRODUCTION - you want to eventually connect this machine to the
                 LON-CAPA content sharing network. This setting is for
                 schools, colleges, and universities, that currently
-                are running - or in the future will run - courses
+                are running - or in the future will run - courses.
 2) STAND-ALONE - you want this machine to run in 'stand-alone' mode and
-                 not be connected to other LON-CAPA machines for now
+                 not be connected to other LON-CAPA machines for now.
 3) DEVELOPMENT - you want to do software (not content!) development with
                  this workstation and eventually link it with the
                  workstations of other LON-CAPA software developers.
@@ -133,8 +133,8 @@ unless (-e "<TARGET />") {
   print(&lt;&lt;END);
            WELCOME TO LON-CAPA!
 
-If you have questions, please visit http://install.lon-capa.org
-or contact helpdesk\@lon-capa.org.
+If you have questions, please visit http://install.loncapa.org
+or contact helpdesk\@loncapa.org.
 
 ===============================================================================
 The following 7 values are needed to configure LON-CAPA:
@@ -162,8 +162,8 @@ close(OUT);
 **** Machine Role ****
 Library server (recommended if first-time installation of LON-CAPA):
    Servers that are repositories of authoritative educational resources.
-   These servers also provide the construction space by which instructors
-   assemble their classroom online material.
+   These servers also provide the authoring spaces in which content
+   creators (e.g., faculty instructors) create their learning content.
 Access server:
    Servers that load-balance high-traffic delivery of educational resources
    over the world-wide web.
@@ -208,13 +208,13 @@ if ($hostname=~/([^\.]*)\.([^\.]*)$/) {
   print(&lt;&lt;END);
 
 **** Domain ****
-[This does NOT need to correspond to internet address domains.
+[This does NOT need to correspond to an internet address domain.
  Please make this name short AND descriptive of your organization.
  Domain names are close to impossible to change later!!!
  Good examples might be "msu" or "bionet" or "vermontcc".
  Bad examples are "physics" (too general)
    or "michiganstateuniversity" (too long)
-   or "msuedu" (internet domain, just make it "msu")
+   or "msuedu" (just make it "msu", or else make it msu.edu)
    or "msuphysics" (only if there is a good reason to limit to department
                     - we don't know of one)
    or "mydomain" (what is that?)
@@ -225,7 +225,9 @@ if ($hostname=~/([^\.]*)\.([^\.]*)$/) {
  cluster, you MUST contact the LON-CAPA group at MSU (loncapa\@loncapa.org)
  to have a domain name assigned, and then use it exactly as given. This is
  also true for test installs that might eventually turn into production setups.
- Stop now if you didn't do so.]
+ The short domain name needs to be unique, if your aim is to join a cluster 
+ containing existing domains. Stop now if you have not yet contacted the 
+ MSU LON-CAPA group.] 
 END
 
 # get domain name
@@ -382,8 +384,8 @@ This should be the LON-CAPA machine ID o
 domain.  If you only have a single library server in your domain, then
 the Primary Library server ID will be the machine ID of that server. 
 This server will be where domain data which are not associated with any
-specific home library server will be stored (e.g., e-mail broadcast by
-administrators to users in the domain).
+specific home library server will be stored (e.g., configurations that
+apply to all nodes in the domain).
 END
     if (defined($primaryLibServer)) {
         print(&lt;&lt;END);
@@ -524,7 +526,7 @@ while (!$flag) {
 
 The internet domain name used for servers at your institution 
 should be provided.  This will be similar to: ustate.edu or
-topcollege.ac.uk or my.hostingcompany.com, i.e., the part of
+topcollege.ac.uk or myhostingcompany.com, i.e., the part of
 a server hostname which indicates to which organization the 
 server belongs.
 
@@ -995,7 +997,7 @@ POSSIBLE CHOICES:
 3) allow insecure connections to this machine but only allow connections
     to machines that support secure connections
 4) allow insecure connections
-ENTER NEW VALUE (currenly $securenum):
+ENTER NEW VALUE (currently $securenum):
 END
     my $choice2=&lt;&gt;;
     chomp($choice2);